Posting 2 new poems
The first poem is about one night I spent at Rishikesh far away from the city just watching the stars in the plain sky.Hope you like it.
The other one is about me, what I am and what I feel like everyday. Thats being me !!
Tonight
If there ever was a time,
I wanted you along; o dear, it was tonight,
So that you could hear the silence, without a chime,
And see the darkness, without a spark and light.
My back on the sand, hands stretched out,
All I could see was sparkling gems,
One more majestic than the other,
I imagined shapes, one brilliant than the other.
There was no light and yet so much of sparkle and joy,
I had to agree, Ya heaven must be above, had to be,
I craved for the stars, just like a child for his toy,
But I ain’t getting them, coz everything has a place to be.
I wish you were here darling, to share my feeling,
I felt naked among the stars, never felt so strong and true,
Just the sight of the sky, was just so healing,
Confessing all my sins, forgetting all my pain, I just stayed kneeling…….
----Dhimrock
21st March…1.46 A.M. on my bed..about to fall asleep…thanking the person who inspired me to write this one….Thanks….
5 comments:
You keep writing poems like these, I will keep reading.
I felt like seeing those stars in the night too. Did that night really exist? I am sure it sounds more beautiful than it was. Brillaint words.
Urs,
You know who.
Oye I rally dont know who it is;
but whoever you are, ya surely that night existed......
And Na, the night was that beautiful, my words may not even do justice to it !!
I am sure your words do justice
Urs,
U know who :)
Beautiful.
Please tell me who is writing these comments. I may write something for my finest admirer.
:)
Dhimant
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